In this lesson we go over feedback to an IELTS causes and solutions question related to the topic of criminality.   

Antonio went from a band 5 in the mock test to a 6.5 in his actual IELTS writing test in just over one month to achieve his target score. The whole process is documented in this podcast series.

The IELTS Writing Task 2 Question was: 

In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.  

What do you think are the main causes of crime?  

How can we deal with those causes?