Here I go againĀ  - Lemme explained! I liked Moana but there's no doubt that the storytelling is very sloppy. in this episode, I go on and on (and on! it's a long one) about all the problems with the plot, theme, and conflict and how I'd fix it, analyzing stories is the best way to learn what to do and not to do. enjoy!

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